poetry presentation reflection

        


reflection Question

What is the easiest part? the easiest part is to choose and writes poems because I don't need to think much about how beautiful or ugly it is but i choose from my feeling.
What is the best part? the best part is putting picture in because all the picture are so cute and it is very easy to find in the internet.
What did you done well?graphics because all of the graphics are very awesome for me.
What can you improve? Make the poem more making sense because after all the comment I read, Risha says to almost all of my poem that it doesn't really make sense ( But Alanah understand ).
What did you learn? I learn about difference kind of poems and how is it difference for example : couplet is a two line poem and alliteration is a  poem that have alot of the same first syllable for each word..

In paragraphs

I think the easiest part is to choose and writes poems because I don't need to think much about how beautiful or ugly it is but i choose from my feeling. The best part for me is to put in pictures because all the picture are so cute and it is very easy to find in the internet.And the part I think that I have done very well would be to put in graphics and pictures because all of the graphics are very awesome for me.. I could improve by make the poem more making sense because after all the comment I read, Risha says to almost all of my poem that it doesn't really make sense ( But Alanah understand ).From this presentation it teach me about difference kind of poems and the difference of each poem for example : couplet is a two line poem and alliteration is a  poem that have  a lot of the same first syllable for each word.

social study reflection

What explorer did you choose? I choose francisco pizzaro because both me and kenny have a little bit of information about this explorer at first so we think it will be easier that we choose the one we already know about.
What did you done well? I done well with the imovie part because it is easy to just put in video and picture and arrange a little bit.
What is the hardest part? Move the character because i cant not see how the character move and i got tired while move the character.
What did you learn?I learn about an explorer, when and where did he explore and born. Where did he explore and why did he explore.
What can you improve? I can improve with the recording and character moving because there is back ground noise and the character move to much.

As paragraphs

 I choose francisco pizzaro because both me and kenny have a little bit of information about this explorer at first so we think it will be easier that we choose the one we already know about. And the part I have done well is with the Imovie part because it is easy to just put in video and picture and arrange a little bit. The hardest part for me is to move the character because I can't really see where the character is going and i got tired while move the character.I learn about an explorer, when and where did he explore and born. Where did he explore and why did he explore. I think I can improve with the recording and character moving because there is back ground noise and the character move to much.

Persuasive Essays Writing Reflection

-Which topic did you decide to choose for this essay? Should student be able to choose what they want to learn?
-Why did you decide to choose this topic? Because I also want to choose my own subject.
-What was the most challenging part? Why? The most challenging part is to find the author of the web for the citation because there was none!  
-What was the best part? Why? The best part is when I am done with all the hard work. I feel (nothing) proud of myself
-What would be your next idea for a persuasive essay? Why? My next idea would be, there should be 4 days of school and 3 days of weekend! Because I want to have 3 days weekend and I want to compare this new one to the old ( same topic ) one I did in grade 4.

1. What is the topic for your informational writing? basket ball.

2. Why did you decide to pick this topic? I like to play basketball.

3. What was your favorite part? When I put in picture.

4. What was the most challenging part? write a pharaghraph that is easy to understand and use correct grammar

5. What would be the next topic for your informational 

 writing if you were ask to write it again? Why? If we need to write about the topic i know well, I will write about human body. But if we can write about any things, I will write about apple ( electronic brand ) or maybe about the history of gun or may be america.

 what is your personal narrative about?
- why did you choose this topic?
- what is ONE thing you did really well in this piece of writing?
- what are your strengths as a writer?
- what are some areas you would like to improve upon? How?

My personal narrative is about when I broke my arm and I was about to be in the mozart semi final contest

I choose this topic because I want other people to know about when I broke my arm.

I think one thing I did well is to share true and exact story so other will understand me better

My strength as a writer is to write funny story.

The area I want to improve is at the ending, I need to make my ending be a memerable part and make everybody remember my story well. And at the ending it should answer all the question during the story and at the first part of the story.

fourth's reading goal

  

My reading goal is to use all of the comprehension strategies and to not use the same strategies more tham 1 time in a week.

It going great and I have a bin to the strategy I have already work in 1 week.

 when I look through my reading journal I don't use 1 comprehension strategy more than 1 time a week.

I was succesful because all the time from when I start my goal, I use every goal and not the same for each week. 


I think my next reading goal is to reading for a longer period of time.

MY PERSUASIVE ESSAY

                  





















                             In this project I learn a lot of thing that my friends think ( what is really matter to them). And I learn how to write a good persuasive essay, what is a persuasive essay, how is a persuasive essay different from a sentences or a paragraph    -ECT-I also learn how to use Voice-thread, If I don"t do this project I won't know what is a Voice-thread. And this help me know that what is the other student think about to have a 3 days weekend, and it help me to think about other essay that i didn't think about before ( Like: May be to have NO homework is a good Idea, or may be the government should step down, or I think we should recycle the trash. ( for example) )

                            I think the things I really, really did well is
What I think I will do better next time:
What is this project for:
What I like about this project:
Why I choose this topic: