I think that my mood in sixth grade is like the artwork by Jackson Pollock because the painting shows all different ideas or emotions I have. The picture has lots of colour that can be represent as my ideas that pop out every time I have a project or homework. Like when I have an assignment in science to make a planet project, my ideas start popping up in my head and I think that if I choose to make a 3D planet by sticking foam out of a foam plate will the teacher like it because it need to be creative to get an E. Then another idea come up, ‘how about if I just make a poster?’ but then I think if I make poster, some of my friend may think I’d copy them because they said they are going to make poster.’ After that, another idea come ‘what if I tape a planet to a rope and make a motor at the middle so it can move around the sun like the usual Earth do? But if I don’t finish it on time?’ I think that the ideas I have are like the colour in the paper that. I didn't have only one idea and the paper didn’t have only one colour too. Also this picture is like me when I once forgot to do my French homework. I felt angry when Mr. Olivier shouts at me. I felt sad that I didn’t do my homework. I felt shock when I forget to do my homework. But I also felt crazy. I think all my ideas or emotion is the paint, and I’m the paper, which is full with paints.
Maybe you can capitalize your M.
ReplyDeleteI feel like everything is honest. Maybe you don't have to write "Three D" just write "3D" Great job :D
ReplyDeleteI think your writing really comes from your heart and you did a great job. :)
ReplyDeleteI think your writing really comes from your heart and you did a great job. :)
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