You have good information and images. I think you should check on you grammar. -Risha
I really like how you had a lot of good information and that the images match your words perfectly! :) -Piano
You included a lot of info...next time add more pictures and also make sure the picture do not cover the words.
PatYou have great reasons to support your thesis, but you could make it better if you add number facts, and a title that hooks the reader. :)
You have good information and images. I think you should check on you grammar. -Risha
ReplyDeleteI really like how you had a lot of good information and that the images match your words perfectly! :) -Piano
ReplyDeleteYou included a lot of info...next time add more pictures and also make sure the picture do not cover the words.
ReplyDeletePat
ReplyDeleteYou have great reasons to support your thesis, but you could make it better if you add number facts, and a title that hooks the reader. :)